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Post Posté le 30/11/2010 à 20:51:49    Sujet du message : Besoin d'aide pour traduction anglais/francais
Bonjour, pour demain j'ai un essay en anglais à faire, mais je voudrais savoir si quelqu'un pourrait corriger mes fautes s'il vous plait?

“Should parents interfere with their children’s choices?”

Nowadays, our parent) intervene in our choices and some time they make decisions on our place. But sometimes it is possible that we do not agree with them and it makes that we contradict ourselves more and more. Thus we can wonder: if interventions of our parents in our choices are necessary?
Thus first of all, in a first part we shall see the necessity of the parents in the participation of our choice. And in a second and last part, we shall see the inconveniences of the participation of the choices of our parents whom we do not accept necessarily!

First and foremost, I think that the parents are responsible and have already a life experience that is why they can show us the good way and help us for example when we do not know what to make in the choice of our studies, or our intended work and the fact that they have some experience in the life can we reassured because they can share their knowledge with us. And I think that our parents know us better than anybody in our tastes, our leisure activities … Thus advises to them are very important. Furthermore, "generally" the parents want the best for their children, and when they punish us, it is for our good, for example if we have difficulties at the school, deprive us the mobile, can be a solution so that we concentrate more in our work … And it allows the parents who were "neglected" by their own parents to see the success of their children. Finally, I think that the fact that our parents intervene in our choices can guide us, and avoid us making errors …
But on the other hand, we have necessarily no same preferences, nor the same age is the fact that the parents intervene in our choices can provoke conflicts; because they do not still realize our feelings. For example a father "doctor" can want that his son becomes a doctor; but what is not necessarily the taste of the child, what would maybe prefer to become "a pastry cooks". Thus sometimes, our parents should let us make our own decisions and let us become responsible in turn without being too much on our back.

In conclusion, I think that the intervention of our parent) is necessary to help us, or we directed because they know us well but sometimes that they believe to be good for us does not correspond to us completely …
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